文／  李思恬

 

 

There are four people in my family, my parents, my sister and me. This is my mom, she is 31 years old, she has long hair, big eyes and small nose, and she seems very beautiful, she is quiet .She likes music and she sings very well, she is our “home doctor”. We love her very much，do you like her? Then, I tell you about my dad. My dad is our “home driver”, he is 39 years old, he has short hair, big eyes and small nose, and he is cool! My dad likes sports and he does sports everyday. He is humorous, my dad gives us a lot of fun and jokes, everyone in my family always laugh and laugh. Yes! We are really very happy! My sister is 6 years old, she is a pretty girl, and she is very cute and lovely. My name is Li Sitian, I’m a beautiful girl from Kaifaqu No.1 primary school, I like music and I speak English well. Oh, I ‘m quiet, too, just like my mom.

I love everybody in my family, we love each other.

教師點評：四年級的孩子能用簡單的英語句子，描寫出家人詳細的人物特征，好一個happy family!值得鼓勵和學習。

（作者：河南省安陽高新區第一小學四（2）班                                                                            指導老師  趙濤）